Thursday 5 November 2015

my simile poem

A Fox

has sneaky as a robber
as fast as lightning
as furry as a bunny

cute as a baby
I want the fox at the zoo

by sean

5 comments:

  1. Foxes are sneaky, aren't they? Your drawing of a fox is really good - the colour is spot on! Well done.
    Mrs S.

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  2. I like how you used different words like sneaky and lightning.
    I think Sean if you can more make more poems you would get a lot of comments.

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  3. hello sean i really like your poem how it says ''as sneaky as a fox''. and as ''cute as a baby''

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  4. I like the saying as fast as lightning. I like your picture it is really cute and colorful. And i like that the colours mach.

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  5. Hi Sean
    I love your post and the fox is so cute <3

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